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Where He Ends and I Begin

Where He Ends and I Begin - Cardeno C. Wow, this one is not working for me, and I usually like Cardeno's books quite a bit. But the story keeps switching from one character to the other and you get the same scene from each POV. I could be ok with that (though it's really not my favorite thing for a book to do) if it were just the important scenes being replayed but I don't need two nearly identical versions one after the other of them buying snacks or walking to dinner. And the voices for both guys are too similar especially since their characters are supposed to be very different people. I was losing track of who was the view-point character and who wasn't, if I have to keep going back and checking the chapter headings to know who's head I'm in something isn't working.
This one is going back on the shelf. Maybe I'll try it again another time.